LEAGUE DAY 1; Olawuyi Blessing VS Hevardinar Inspired
Today, this moment, a great wordlord and wordlordess will be spitting fire into each others face, contesting for the crown.
Take a seat, grasp a cup of milk with your legs crossed and mind in anticipation, as you enjoy this battle of words between OLAWUYI BLESSING AND HEVARDINAR INSPIRED.
NOTE;
1) The judges decision takes 70% of the judgement while well wishes and lovers of poetry votes takes 30%.
2) Upon no circumstance must any of the above mentioned poets vote.
3) The contestants are urged to invite friends to vite for them using the commentsection of this post. No rule exempts you from canvassing for votes.
5) Voting lasts for 18 hours from commencement of Duel.
6) Vote using I VOTE POEM 1 or I VOTE POEM 2
7) Results would be uploaded briefly after the closure of votes.
Good luck to the wordlord and Wordlordess... LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!
THEME: BLACK BLOOD
•HEVARDINAR INSPIRED
Title; Black blood
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Oh Africa! Oh Africa!
How sweet my mouth speaks of you
Citizens with one blood and voice
And rivers dancing to the tune of unity
Children of different mothers
Mothers of different generations
Generations from heroic victory
It's runs in the blood
In the veins of my fathers runs blood
Blood of bravery
Bravery from slavery
In it, I was born
Oh Africa! Oh Africa!
Even in the next world,
An African I would love to be
I'm African, I'm black, I'm beautiful.
©Hevardinar
•OLAWUYI BLESSING
Title; "BLACK BLOOD"
What if I was born with a black blood?
Will I ever mature beyond babyhood?
What if I was born with a black blood?
Will I feel sick every now and then?
And what if I was born with a black blood?
Will I be an unaccustomed being to the rest in the world?
What if I was born with a black blood?
Will I be a liveborn baby in coma?
What if I was born with a black blood?
Will every of my vein(s) be filled with an undivine bleakness?
And what if I was born with a black blood?
Will I be the broken being trying to cover up my shamefulness?
What if I was born with a black blood?
Will I dare to outgrow my botherations?
What if I was born with a black blood?
Will I be mastered in sins as claimed?
And what if I was born with a black blood?
Will I be known as an unredeemed soul or an unequalled blessing?
Poet: Olawuyi, Blessing Ishola.
GOOD LUCK TO ALL POETS ONCE AGAIN.
wow! both poets are good but poem two has my vote. olawuyi, blessing Ishola. I enjoyed the disturbing nature of the poem.
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ReplyDeleteIt's an interesting poem with a lot of wisdom embeded in it. Olawuyi Blessing ishola has my vote.
ReplyDeleteI VOTE POEM 2
ReplyDeleteI vote Poem 1.
ReplyDeleteNeither of the poems has a "wow" effect with their interpretation of the title. However, Poem 1 is convenient in the sense that it speaks of a black nation. Poem 2 was however not so clear about what it sees black blood to be.
Both poems appear like pieces that would do better on a vocal stage. Kudos bards.
I'm sure this is just warm up
Poem 2 is perspicacious and owlish,thus,truly depicts our father land Africa.poem 2 has vote
ReplyDeleteI vote for poem 1
ReplyDeleteI VOTE POEM 2
ReplyDeletePoem two looks ambiguous and uneasy to understand for a simple audience...
ReplyDeleteI vote for poem 1
Wow!
ReplyDeleteI VOTE POEM 2
So inspiring and yocop
I vote poem 2
ReplyDeleteMy vote goes to poem 1, simple and straight.
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ReplyDeleteHeav'n this is me. Soooo proud of you!
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ReplyDeletePoem one is beautiful, I vote poem 1
ReplyDeleteHevin bae, its clear to see.. I vote poem 1
ReplyDeleteBabe!! Well said, I vote poem 1
ReplyDeleteHmmmm.. Hevin. I vote for poem 1
ReplyDeleteNice construction!
ReplyDeletePoem 1 has taken my heart
I vote poem1
I VOTE POEM 1.
ReplyDeleteNice one @hevardinar.
My vote goes to poem 2
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