LEAGUE DAY 15 RESULTS
• HEVARDINAR INSPIRED vs JOSIAH AKPAN
NOTE:
Hevardinar's poem lacks punctuation. Hardly did I find one except the full stop. Anyway, her concept is one to fall in love with; Death, but why would she end the poem with; " I am Africa..." It mars all her efforts.- A JUDGE.
Josiah is a brilliant poet I must say, although this piece of his is one which makes me disappointed in him. Grammatical errors and absence of punctuation dominated his poem. Also, he should learn that brevity adds to the vale of a poem. Not all readers wants to be stressed while reading. Nice job anyway.- A JUDGE.
JUDGES DECISION
Hevardinar = 43%
Josiah = 27%
VOTES
Hevardinar = 0%
Josiah = 30%
TOTAL
Hevardinar = 43%
Josiah = 57%
Therefore, JOSIAH AKPAN wins the duel. Awarded 3 points.
• AYOBAMI AYANFEMI vs IBRAHIM YUSUF
NOTE:
Ayobami's creativity is superb! Anyways, tell him to learn the beauty of brevity, thus he should apply it in his poems.- A JUDGE
JUDGES DECISION
Ayobami = 24%
Ibrahim = 46%
VOTES
Ayobami = 0%
Ibrahim = 30%
TOTAL
Ayobami = 24%
Ibrahim = 76%
Therefore, IBRAHIM YUSUF wins the duel. Awarded 3 points.
• BRENDA MARTHA vs KOLADE OLAWALE
NOTE:
These poems are way to hard to decide on. A tie it is.- A JUDGE.
JUDGES DECISION
Brenda = 35%
Kolade = 35%
VOTES
Brenda = 13.1%
Kolade = 16.9%
TOTAL
Brenda = 48.1%
Kolade = 51.9%
Therefore, KOLADE OLAWALE wins the duel. Awarded 3 points.
• ADELEYE OLUWADARASIMI vs MOHAMMED SHAMS-DEEN
NOTE:
None of the poems are better. Write more poets! You can do better than this pieces presented.- A JUDGE
JUDGES DECISION
Adeleye = 15%
Mohammed = 15%
VOTES
Adeleye = 35%
Mohammed = 35%
TOTAL
Adeleye= 50%
Mohammed = 50%
The duel results into a tie. Both poets awarded a point each.
• ADEPOJU BABAJIDE vs ANIEBIET EFFIONG
NOTE:
Both pieces lacks punctuation. How do you expect your readers to flow with you when you fail to punctuate your poems! None of the poems are appealing. A tie should it be.- A JUDGE
JUDGES DECISION
Adepoju = 35%
Effiong = 35%
VOTES
Adepoju = 17.1%
Effiong = 12.9%
TOTAL
Adepoju = 52.1%
Effiong = 47.9%
Therefore, ADEPOJU BABAJIDE wins the duel. Awarded 3 points.
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