League Day 18; IBRAHEEM YUSUF vs WAKCHIN NENGAK
LIVE: IBRAHEEM YUSUF vs WAKCHIN NENGAK
NOTE;
1) The judges decision takes 70% of the judgement while well wishes and lovers of poetry votes takes 30%.
2) Upon no circumstance must any of the above mentioned poets vote.
3) The contestants are urged to invite friends to Vote for them using the comment section of this post. No rule exempts you from canvassing for votes.
5) Voting lasts for 18 hours from commencement of Duel.
6) Vote using I VOTE POEM 1 or I VOTE POEM 2
7) Results would be uploaded briefly after the closure of votes.
Good luck to the wordlords.. LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!
THEME: MIRAGE
IBEAHEEM YUSUF
TITLE: Mirage (Haiku).
Confusion river;
where back is front & vice versa
you move front & be back.
WAKCHIN NENGAK
TITLE; MIRAGE
That "school will get you rich" is a mere ruse
Daily forcing minds to accede a grey-bearded sham
See, that trove doesn't lurk in morrow
But, we are too busy trying to get windy treasures;
-a good job,
-9 to 5 slavery & exploitation,
& a PAIN-SHOWN
When we retire from strenuous jobs.
For, we have been deluded that this shadowy treasure still awaits us,
After bagging papery certs at the end of school's tunnel.
So, we walk miles - patching our soles without job
Even when idleness is what awaits us.
See, try a new route to earning
Or force your brain to fathom outworn & complex facts
& later regret perusing abstract sense not life skills
©Wakchin Nengak
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