League Day 17; ADELEYE OLUWADARASIMI vs ANIEBIET EFFIONG


LIVE:  ADELEYE OLUWADARASIMI vs ANIEBIET EFFIONG

NOTE;
1) The judges decision takes 70% of the judgement while well wishes and lovers of poetry votes takes 30%.

2) Upon no circumstance must any of the above mentioned poets vote.

3) The contestants are urged to invite friends to Vote for them using the comment section of this post. No rule exempts you from canvassing for votes.

5) Voting lasts for 18 hours from commencement of Duel.

6) Vote using I VOTE POEM 1 or I VOTE POEM 2

7) Results would be uploaded briefly after the closure of votes.

Good luck to the wordlords.. LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!


THEME: MIRAGE

ADELEYE OLUWADARASIMI

TITLE: THE FUTURE

Water upfront.
Illusion I see.
Cloudy Fog upfront.
Smoke I also see.

I leaped up to see farther
To see the days beyond
I tried to see further
I wanted to see the world beyond

But unfortunately, I saw no dazzle
Yet my sight is not altered
I heard no frizzle
Yet My Ears are not tampered

I cannot see the future. 
That is the message. 
There are no predictions for the future. 
It is always like a Mirage.

©OLUWADARASIMI M. ADELEYE.


ANIEBIET EFFIONG

TITLE; LIFE, A DELUSSION

I Have Chased Shadows,
Dreaming And Thinking About My Days Tomorrow.
I Have Swimmed And Swimmed In The Rivers Of Shadow.
When Shall These Feelings Go?

Yesteryears I Thought I Saw Love,
Flying Unto Me Like A Dove.
Never Knowing It Wasn't A Behove.
Now Am Thinking Of How These Feelings I Can Shove.

I Thought I Had Found Happiness,
In A Desert Of Bleakness And Sadness,
Like Water In A Barren Wilderness.
Yesterday I Thought I Saw Hope,
But Today, Hope I Glope.

My Dreams Are Broken,
Into Debris My Heart Is Broken. 
These Are My Broken Words, Never Meant To Be Spoken.
My True Feelings I Leave Them Unspoken,
For I Am Emotionally Frozen.

Life Is A Mirage, Though It Looks Real.
Love Sometimes Is An Illusion, A False Emotion You Feel.

3 comments:

  1. Poem 1,need to work on his content very well. It lack the convincing power, as if the poet is afraid of writing, or he is scared of the theme.
    The theme mirage is not well portrayed.
    Should also Learn to be consistent with tenses.

    Poem 2 is appealing...

    They both write well
    Well done guys.

    I vote poem 2

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  2. Thanks to all who voted. Voting has closed.

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