League Day 23: HEVARDINAR INSPIRED vs ONI TOMIWA
This duel is dedicated to all victims of the modern day slavery in Libya. Your voices are heard on this side.
NOTE;
1) The judges decision takes 70% of the judgement while well wishes and lovers of poetry votes takes 30%.
2) Upon no circumstance must any of the above mentioned poets vote.
3) The contestants are urged to invite friends to Vote for them using the comment section of this post. No rule exempts you from canvassing for votes.
5) Voting lasts for 18 hours from commencement of Duel.
6) Vote using I VOTE POEM 1 or I VOTE POEM 2
7) Results would be uploaded briefly after the closure of votes.
Good luck to the wordlords.. LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!
NOTE;
1) The judges decision takes 70% of the judgement while well wishes and lovers of poetry votes takes 30%.
2) Upon no circumstance must any of the above mentioned poets vote.
3) The contestants are urged to invite friends to Vote for them using the comment section of this post. No rule exempts you from canvassing for votes.
5) Voting lasts for 18 hours from commencement of Duel.
6) Vote using I VOTE POEM 1 or I VOTE POEM 2
7) Results would be uploaded briefly after the closure of votes.
Good luck to the wordlords.. LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!
THEME: ENSLAVED
HEVARDINAR INSPIRED
TITLE: Enslaved
Men and women of black nations
Seeking refuge in another man's land
Greener pastures they duel on
Thinking all hope is lost in their homes
Italy by road, Europe by sea
People get auctioned
Like used equipment that doesn't have values
Traders are business vagabonds
Oh Africa!
Why have we fallen victims in this century of ours?
People of my complexion get tortured and chained
For days and weeks with no food at hand.
What pleasure is derived from it?
To see the pain of another man's mother,
The tears of children, the scars of fathers
And the death of many
We're enslaved by our mind
Culture and traditions has been disposed in the sea
Ignorance becomes the modern king
Everyone wants to travel before the others
Families would learn from mistakes of their pals
Tears from slavery would reduce
When illiteracy stops ruling
Lets go back to where we came from
©hevardinar
ONI TOMIWA
Title: ENSLA(Y)VED
I am my father's heir
Yet a slave
Not in chains
Yet not free
I am a fruit
Stuck in the branches
of a tree,
hidden.
Not cleansed, not squashed
Bruised. Broken. beclouded
A slave is not only that one
With padlocked mouth and chained legs
Or that one with ragged skin
Who cooks the meals
And eat the left-over(s).
A slave is not only that one
Churned in dark rooms
In the deserts of Libya.
A slave is that beign
Carrying about programmed head
Speaking words
Collected from another mouth.
I am one.
Here, in my father's house
I must reason
with my father's brain
Sing my father's song
Swallow the morsels
His hands had formed
Trod his chosen path
And not mine
Like a robot,
subject to commands.
Freedom does not mean
a bird should fly
But that it should fly
To where it wants
Not just to fetch fronds
And head back to mother's nest.
Enslaved I am
In my father's house.
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