LEAGUE DAY 7 RESULTS
• ADELEYE OLUWADARSIMI vs OLAWUYI ISHOLA
NOTE
Both poets did a nice job, except for the little grammatical errors present in their pieces. Although a little too evident in Olawuyi's poem.
-A Judge
It was quite difficult to choose between the two writings because they seem good at a level.
The words of Adeleye is quite impressive but I expected more from the tone of the poem.
- A Judge.
JUDGES DECISION
Olawuyi = 17.5%
Adeleye = 52.5%
VOTES
Olawuyi = 30%
Adeleye = 0%
TOTAL
Olawuyi = 47.5%
Adeleye = 52.5%
Therefore ADELEYE OLUWADARASIMI wins the duel. 3 points awarded.
• BRENDA MARTHA vs OLANIYI OLOLADE
NOTE;
Brenda's mood seem quite calm. I earlier expected to read a painful and angry kind of poem due to the title of the poem but the writer's choice of words are rather too simple for the theme and also not deeply expressed.
- A Judge.
JUDGES DECISION
Olaniyi = 35%
Brenda = 35%
VOTES
Olaniyi = 6%
Brenda = 24%
TOTAL
Olaniyi = 41%
Brenda = 59%
Therefore BRENDA MARTHA wins the duel. Awarded 3 points.
• ADEPOJU BABAJIDE vs KOLAWOLE ENIFENI SAMAD
NOTE;
Adepoju never really brought out a catchy words from the poem. The poem looks a bit complicated than it actually is. Although I love his words and style, but he can always do better.
- A Judge.
I will regard Kolawole's poem as a reservoir where grammatical errors are kept. The beauty of his poem was rendered useless with these errors, he should look out for that next time he's writing.
- A Judge
JUDGES DECISION
Adepoju = 35%
Kolawole = 35%
VOTES
Adepoju = 0%
Kolawole = 30%
TOTAL
Adepoju = 35%
Kolawole = 65%
Therefore KOLAWOLE wins the duel. Awarded 3 points.
• AYOBAMI AYANFEMI vs ONI TOMIWA
NOTE
Ayobami did not really deal with the topic as much. Although, I love his figure of speech especially his rhetorical questions, but he could actually do better next time.
Also, his connection with the reader is poor, try improving on that as well.
- A Judge
JUDGES DECISION
Ayobami = 17.5%
Oni = 52.5%
VOTES
Ayobami = 10%
Oni = 20%
TOTAL
Ayobami = 27.5%
Oni = 72.5%
Therefore ONI TOMIWA wins the duel. Awarded 3 points.
• HEVARDINAR INSPIRED vs OJO ADEWALE IYANDA
NOTE
Adewale is just close to perfection. Short and precise! I love that (brevity).
Hevardinar use of words is cool too, but I expected more from her choice of simple words. Her middle lines also were somewhat light hear. Good job though.
- A Judge
JUDGES DECISION
Hevardinar = 35%
Ojo = 35%
VOTES
Hevardinar = 30%
Ojo = 0%
TOTAL
Hevardinar = 65%
Ojo = 35%
Therefore HEVARDINAR wins the duel. Awarded 3 points.
Thanks very much, our Judges.
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