League Day 13; HEVARDINAR INSPIRED vs ANIEBIET EFFIONG.
Leader's have fallen!
Fallen during our fight for freedom,
Our quest for power...
Each day are their names painted on the sands of time,
Their legacies rally behind them
Flaunting their glory,
For truly, they fell to favour us, Africans...
Without much ado, let the contest begin!... Ball the of words between HEVARDINAR INSPIRED and ANIEBIET EFFIONG... Enjoy!
NOTE;
1) The judges decision takes 70% of the judgement while well wishes and lovers of poetry votes takes 30%.
2) Upon no circumstance must any of the above mentioned poets vote.
3) The contestants are urged to invite friends to Vote for them using the comment section of this post. No rule exempts you from canvassing for votes.
5) Voting lasts for 18 hours from commencement of Duel.
6) Vote using I VOTE POEM 1 or I VOTE POEM 2
7) Results would be uploaded briefly after the closure of votes.
Good luck to the wordlords.. LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!
THEME: FALLEN HEROES
(In memory of Africa past warriors (leaders))
HEVARDINAR INSPIRED
Title; Fallen heroes
What a great loss!
A gem, A hero,
With great pain and agony in our heart
It can't be explained
The ground were he walked on with pride
Has swallowed him into it belly
All the good and riches
He can't be forgotten ever in history
Keep on resting
©hevardinar
ANIEBIET EFFIONG
Title; FALLEN BUT NOT FORGOTTEN
Each time i see papa's old rugged shirt
it reminds me of our great heroes
Who lived and survived by their ancient creed, "We shall never give up..."
I remember how they fell their faces to their foes
And today they sleep beneath the land they fought for
I wish you can hear the sound of the song in the midst of desolation
I wish you can read the words in my unseen lines
I wish you can understand my feelings
A branch has fallen from an Iroko tree
My heart is a truck,
Ladened with loads of buden
My eyes are as heavy as a cloud
Ready to pour forth its rain
I wish i don't get drowned
Like Papa who got drowned in the ocean of his blood
Yesterday i found a paper beneath papa's bed
In it were papa's words before he left
And it reads,
Dear Folabi,
Paradventure i don't return,
Take Juke my wife to my room
Show her my portrait
Tell her never to weep
For i am always with her
Feed her with wine of words
till she gets filled and forgets her grieve
Folabi my son,
If my students misses me
Teach them how to learn without being taught
Folabi my son,
A brave man never runs away from death
He fights with him face-to-face
I have fought with death
The tall one, short, fat and lean one
and conquered them many a time
Folabi my son,
If your little sister cries asking of me
Tell her a child who wishes to eat with his elders must wash his hands clean
And a child who wishes to sleep with his fathers
must have a brave heart
Tell her i have gone to sleep with my fathers
Tell her never to cry,
for no one cries when great men sleeps
Their voices might disturb them
Great men sleep in peace.
Your beloved father,
Adeniran.
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