League Day 12;HUSSANI ABDULRAHIM VS JOSIAH AKPAN.
LIVE: HUSSANI ABDULRAHIM VS JOSIAH AKPAN
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THEME: BROKEN WALLS
HUSSANI ABDULRAHIM
Title; HOW TO PAINT A COUNTRY
I know, green-white-green is the banner,
But when you tell an artist to paint Nigeria,
He informs you that there's no place for colours,
Save tattered rainbows whose bunched up skins sing of chaos.
First, he dips his sweaty hands in a broth overnight,
As though in a bid to rinse off the pigment of his body.
And he drowns his heart in still waters,
So that when the ritual begins,
Emotions won't get entwined with ethics.
Then with eyes devoid of love,
He paints the rowdy scene of clustered caricatures;
Matchstick figures burdened in gloomy djallabeyahs.
And a mega phone through which a dreamy preacher brays:
Love thy brother, oh son of Adam!
He then crowns these smudges
With the towering, fitting skull of Gen. Murtala Mohammed,
And the final pause of his brush, almost invincible,
Was where a bullet pierced him on a jummat day.
In the end, what the artist gives you
Is a conglomerate of telling scars
Reminiscent of a diseased country
Still searching her swollen feet in a swampy splodge. know, green-white-green is the banner,
But when you tell an artist to paint Nigeria,
He informs you that there's no place for colours,
Save tattered rainbows whose bunched up skins sing of chaos.
First, he dips his sweaty hands in a broth overnight,
As though in a bid to rinse off the pigment of his body.
And he drowns his heart in still waters,
So that when the ritual begins,
Emotions won't get entwined with ethics.
Then with eyes devoid of love,
He paints the rowdy scene of clustered caricatures;
Matchstick figures burdened in gloomy djallabeyahs.
And a mega phone through which a dreamy preacher brays:
Love thy brother, oh son of Adam!
He then crowns these smudges
With the towering, fitting skull of Gen. Murtala Mohammed,
And the final pause of his brush, almost invincible,
Was where a bullet pierced him on a jummat day.
In the end, what the artist gives you
Is a conglomerate of telling scars
Reminiscent of a diseased country
Still searching her swollen feet in a swampy splodge.
JOSIAH AKPAN
Title; BROKEN WALLS
We have seen hungry men
Satisfy their colossal hunger
By building palaces for others six feet below
With materials gotten from broken walls
Only to see themselves years later
As neighbours to the tenants they created
Bloods spilled
Heads shattered
Lives wasted
Chains broken
Chains broken by people who end up putting
A far stronger chain on us
And then the process repeats itself over
Dancing to the frenzy beats of instability
Hear me,
The greatest undoing of those who broke down the walls
Was the bitter fact
That they always builded a greater wall
An incentive for a bitter cycle.
ENJOY!
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